South Common Haiku Set (II)
In November and early December, I posted a new haiku almost every day on my Facebook page. I gathered up the first batch and posted them here on rh.com about a month ago. For those who do not use Facebook and may be interested in the poems, following is another group. I’ll add a third group in a day or two to catch up. I took a break from posting the haiku because it’s actually difficult to write a good one, and I thought I was pushing my luck and worried that I was going to sound like SNL’s old Jack Handey with his “Deep Thoughts.” I wouldn’t want that, “wouldn’t be prudent,” as Dana Carvey used to say.—PM
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South Common Haiku Set (II)
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Common sky in place,
planetarium-vivid.
Double solitaire.
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Maple, pine, and birch,
easy to name in a crowd—
what of the others?
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Not Carl’s cat-feet fog.
More, you can see the park’s breath—
just this side of mist.
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Under the chipped bench,
empty plastic vodka nips,
lottery tickets.
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Far east down South Street,
violet and pink sky lines.
Shirtsleeve November.
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Red bird in the pine,
a small thing, considering.
Overnight rain due.
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Motorcycles rise.
The ugly furniture mill
beautified at dawn.
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—Paul Marion (c) 2011